• Re: Karma Bombs (revised) / Will Dockery

    From W.Dockery@3:633/280.2 to All on Thu Dec 19 13:18:54 2024
    LGeorge Dance wrote:
    Will Dockery wrote:

    Karma Bombs

    The document falls apart
    nothing left to say.

    Dreams fall apart
    not so easy to face.

    When the one I love
    is gone to stay.

    Carefully try
    to walk the line
    then the whole thing falls apart.

    Feeling wounded and lonesome
    feel it
    straight inside my heart.

    I have been exiled
    from the main place
    in this town
    where I had a forum.

    Darkness
    despair
    and la de-da de-da
    it's a swirling raging storm.

    I woke up this morning
    looked at the grounds
    around the shed.

    The trees with vines
    that don't
    let much sun in.

    They told me
    it was okay for a man to cry
    it still feels strange.

    It's obvious
    he slaps you around some
    I thought of you in pain.

    Look out my friend
    Karma's coming down.

    It's got you now
    threefold inside you.

    Karma Bombs
    they fry and flow.

    It lasts for generations
    you must
    responsibility.

    Peace
    please
    for the common good.

    You look so good
    I want to eat you.

    Witty
    amusing eye candy.

    Smudge the sage
    after a
    blackberry lunch
    sweet magnolia and honeysuckle.

    I will personally
    mail the curses
    to anyone who mistreats you.

    Little storm
    it rained in torrents.

    We ponder
    the negro nude painting.

    Your prime lips
    trap of lust.

    Tropic
    look out little peace
    Karma's coming.

    It's got you now
    threefold inside you.

    Look out my friend
    Karma's coming down.

    It's got you now
    threefold inside you.

    Karma Bombs
    they fry and flow.

    It lasts for generations,
    responsibility.

    Karma Bombs
    rat tap on your head.

    Foam washes
    mermaids to shore.

    -Will Dockery

    Note:
    My "Karma Bombs" poem was written in 1998 (I can remember the day I
    wrote it, sitting at a table outside Books-A-Million on Macon Road,
    that's interesting to me, and I think will fuel more poetry soon, stay
    tuned), published in hardcopy both in Playgrounds Magazine and in a
    chapbook that year, and posted here with a time stamp of December 16th
    2002:

    https://groups.google.com/d/msg/alt.arts.poetry.comments/IfYQvyM29VM/lJuuvLMr0PIJ
    What can I say about "Karma Bombs"? For one thing, it's hands-down your
    most famous poem. I'll bet that hundreds of people have heard of "Karma
    Bombs", thanks to Piggy Ross et al. But how many have read it?

    For another, it fits perfectly in this chapter of the book: it's showing
    the speaker hitting rock bottom. It's bleak, depressing, reminding me of
    the Hollow Men although nothing like it, and of the crazy, later Cantos.
    This is the speaker entering hell, or starting to go mad, or however you
    want to call it.

    Well put.

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